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Post by punklil007 on Aug 13, 2005 8:06:55 GMT -5
THis is great KC!!! I did't get to read from the begining because I don't have time but I will when I get back from vacation my family is going on. This last chapter was awesome. I've seen those 103 or however many ways to annoy lord voldemort and they are HALLARIOUS!!! AWESOME JOB!!!AWESOME FIC!!!
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on Aug 13, 2005 10:50:01 GMT -5
thanx guys for all the reviews...i'll try to post the list on here
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on Aug 15, 2005 20:41:31 GMT -5
hey guys can u review on MNFF please?
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on Aug 31, 2005 9:22:50 GMT -5
Chapter 10: Halloween
“Imagine Voldemort playing Twister!” said Hermione. “I can’t!” said Harry while he and Hermione laughed. They were heading to the oak front doors where Filch was waiting for students. Jeanette and Ron just shrugged. “What’s Twister?” asked Ron zipping up his jacket. “It’s a Muggle game. Trust me, if you knew what it was, you’d laugh. I’d explain it but it’s too complicated to explain. You have to see it for yourself,” said Hermione. She was still looking at the paper and they were all enjoying it. “Hold on,” snarled a grumpy voice. It was Filch. They forgot they had to get through him to be able to get into Hogsmeade now. It was Halloween and they were heading to Hogsmeade before the feast later on that night. Filch took out a glowing bottle with some liquid in it and sprayed them. This was a Dark object detector. Filch waited for something to happen and when it didn’t, he allowed them to go. Hermione zipped up her sweater as the cold air hit them. Hogsmeade was packed with students and teachers and they decided to go to the Three Broomsticks first. “Wotcher, Harry!” said a voice. They turned to see a woman with bright pink spiky hair heading towards them. It was Tonks. “Hi Tonks, how are you?” asked Harry smiling. “Good and yourself? Keeping out of trouble eh?” she asked. “And how about you two?” she gestured to Ron and Hermione. “Hi, Tonks! Nice to see you too. Umm this is Jeanette Griffin,” added Hermione. “Yeah I know. Nice to see you again,” said Tonks smiling at her. “So what are you doing here?” asked Hermione as they went to sit down at the pub. “Well, we’re guarding the school aren’t we? It’s Halloween and I’ve heard that things tend to happen at Hogwarts today,” said Tonks. “Yeah, that’s true,” said Ron. One hour later when Tonks left, they decided to head down to the Shrieking Shack. “Why are we heading down this way again?” asked Ron. “For some privacy, maybe, I don’t know,” said Harry. “Are you scared, Ronald?” asked Jeanette. “Please,” said Ron and they laughed. “It’s getting colder,” said Jeanette and she clutched Ron’s arm, making his face turn red. “Weasel’s got a girlfriend, does he?” snarled a voice behind them. They turned to see Malfoy with Nicki clutching his arm, Crabbe, Goyle, and Parkinson. “Do you have a life, Malfoy?” asked Harry rolling his eyes. “I don’t think so, Harry,” said Hermione. “Draco, are you going to let that filthy mudblood talk to you like that?” asked Nicki staring at Hermione menacingly. “Watch your mouth,” said Jeanette letting go of Ron and pulling out her wand. Nicki stepped forward. “Or what?” Nicki stepped forward so that she and Jeanette were about a foot and a half apart. “Let’s go,” said Hermione. “Scared are you, mudblood?” asked Nicki. SMACK Jeanette had hit Nicki across the face and they were now fighting. Malfoy pulled out his wand to curse Jeanette but… “Levicorpus!” Harry shouted and with a loud bang and a flash of light, Draco was dangling upside down in midair as though an invisible hook had hoisted him up by the ankle. “Diffindo,” yelled Pansy and Harry felt a sharp pain across his face and he knew the spell that Pansy had just did had cut him across the face. Hermione flicked her wand at Pansy and her face was instantly covered with bats. She tripped and rolled down the hill and out of sight. Crabbe grabbed Draco’s flailing arms and tried to pull him down but the result was that Draco raised higher and Crabbe’s feet were now ten feet from the ground. “You’ll pay for that one, Potter,” said Goyle but Ron jumped forward, flicked his wand, and shouted “Incarcerous”. Ropes came out his wand and bound Goyle, who also fell and rolled down the hill. Ron ran to where Jeanette and Nicki were still fighting and picked her up off of Nicki, who was sporting a black eye and cut lip. “You wait, Griffin, you might be Dumbledore’s relative but you’ll pay,” she said wiping her mouth. “Avis Maxim!” shouted Jeanette and crows flew out her wand, clawing and biting at Nicki, who started to run. “You ok?” asked Ron. “Of course,” replied Jeanette wiping her mouth, she also, had a cut lip. “What about those two?” asked Hermione pointing at Draco and Crabbe who were yelling. “Silencio,” said Harry pointing his wand at them and even though their mouths were still open, no noise was coming out of it. “C’mon guys, we better get back up to the castle. The feast will be starting soon and we don’t want to miss it do we?” They laughed as they left, leaving the wide eyed Malfoy and Crabbe there.
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on Aug 31, 2005 9:23:41 GMT -5
As they walked into the Great Hall, they saw students already sitting at their house tables talking amongst themselves. The Great Hall was decorated with its usual floating pumpkins and bats were flying above their heads. Harry looked up to the teachers table and saw a skull draped on the windows behind them. As they walked over to the Gryffindor table, they noticed aurors standing guard on the walls. There were at least ten of them including Tonks, Kingsley Shacklebolt who kept fumbling with his left sleeve, and a few others from the Order that Harry didn’t know by name. “What do you think is up with Kingsley? He looks deeply disturbed,” said Harry to the other three when they sat down. “Well don’t they all? I mean, there might be an attack. They all look worried,” replied Hermione. “Yeah but…” started Harry but at that moment, Dumbledore stood up and silence fell through the hall. “Welcome, to what may be for some of you, the last Halloween feast at Hogwarts. If all goes well, this will be a very enjoyable night. Let the feast begin,” he said waving his hands and all types of food appeared on the table. After a while, they were joined by Ginny who was fuming. “What’s up?” asked Ron. “Dean. He’s so stupid,” she said pushing aside a first year, who glowered at her, to sit next to Hermione. “And I don’t want to talk about it right now,” she added as Ron opened his mouth to say something *** “That had to be the best Halloween feast we’ve ever had,” said Ron rubbing his stomach. They were on their way to Gryffindor tower. “Is that all you ever think of, Ron?” asked Hermione rolling her eyes. “For now, yes,” replied Ron. Hermione turned around, her arms folded, and glared at him. “Aren’t you even the least bit worried about what might happen? I mean, think about it, in our first year, a mountain troll comes into the castle and almost kills me and when did that happen, on Halloween. Filch’s cat got attacked on Halloween in our second year. Harry was selected as the fourth champion in a three champion tournament on Halloween three years ago. And now, Harry has proof that something might happen. And you’re worried about your stomach?” finished Hermione angrily. “Well if you put it that way…” started Ron as the staircase started to move so it would join the corridor leading to the Fat Lady’s portrait “Hermione’s right. Let’s just get to Gryffindor tower. It’s safer there than here,” said Jeanette. “Plus people are starting to come up,” added Harry as first years started coming up the same staircase. “Well we can’t just walk off can we, it’s moving!” Hermione replied coldly. BANG “Ahhhh!” screamed Hermione, Jeanette and a few first years. The whole castle had shook and the staircase abruptly stopped in midair. Hermione was clutching to the side of the staircase that she had been thrown against and looked at them, fear in her eyes. “What’s going on?” cried a first year girl. “Don’t worry. We’ll get out of here…somehow,” said Jeanette to the girl. “We’re trapped. Someone HELP!” cried a first year boy. “What are we going to do?” asked Harry. “Best thing’s to go back down,” replied Ron. “Attention all students, report to your dormitories immediately. Under no circumstances are you to be out of your dormitory! Head boy and Head girl, also report to your dormitory!” sounded the voice of Professor McGonagall through the castle. “Well going back down is ruled out,” said Ron. Harry pulled out his wand. “Where do you think you’re going?” asked Hermione pulling him back. “You heard Professor McGonagall.” “Look!” said another first year pointing at the window. They all turned and saw the forest blazing with fire and people wearing cloaks flying on brooms outside. “Harry, no,” muttered Hermione. “Hermione, there are Death Eaters out there trying to get in the castle and burning up the forest. Most likely it’s me they’re looking for and you expect me to just sit up in my dormitory watching? Plus someone from the Order is betraying us…” started Harry. “But Dumbledore will see us,” said Hermione. “Not if I can help it,” said Harry and he pulled out a silvery cloak from his bag. “We can use the invisibility cloak and you don’t even have to come.” “Don’t think I’m letting you go by yourself,” said Hermione. “But what are we going to do about them?” She nodded over to the first years. “I can handle this easily,” said Jeanette pulling out her wand. “Frostius!” White cold mist came out the end out her wand and traced itself from the staircase to the corridor and then hardened into a thick long block of ice. “Whoa,” muttered Ron. “They can go across like this. Ron and I will stay,” said Jeanette. “Thanks,” said Harry amazed. “Hermione?” “Oh ok,” sighed Hermione and Harry pulled the invisibility cloak around them. A few first years were pushed out of the way as Harry and Hermione made their way down the stairs. “Ok everyone, don’t panic,” said Jeanette. “Just make a straight line and walk across the ice. The best idea I can give you is to don’t look down. Ron, I think you should go first and wait at the other end.” Ron nodded and headed across the ice followed by a couple of terrified first years. ***
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on Aug 31, 2005 9:24:47 GMT -5
“Harry, I have a bad feeling about this,” whispered Hermione as they neared the oak front doors. “You didn’t have to come, Hermione,” whispered Harry back to her. “Shhhh” He pushed open the front doors and gasped. Death Eaters were on brooms flying in the sky and showering spells down on the teachers and Death Eaters. “Stupe…” started a Death Eater but he never finished. In the middle of saying the incantation, he clutched his hand to his throat as something long with a sharp point hit him. Harry looked at the forest to see centaurs with their bows raised. “Stupefy!” shouted McGonagall and Tonks who were battling with Death Eaters on the ground. “Where’s Snape?” asked Hermione. “Where’s Shacklebolt?” asked Harry. They closed the front door and stood on the wall of the castle. A blinding white light made all of them turn. Dumbledore was heading towards the fight with his wand out, looking livid. Harry could have sworn that he saw sparks coming from his hair and beard. A few Death Eaters fell from their brooms and lay sprawled on the floor. “Is that the best you got?” shouted Tonks at a Death Eater who just sent a killing curse at her. She easily dodged it and sent a stunning spell at the Death Eater which targeted and the Death Eater fell to the floor. “Harry look!” whispered Hermione pointing to the corner of the castle wall. A cloak swished out of sight and Harry made to go after it put Hermione pulled him back. “Don’t. We shouldn’t be out here in the first place,” said Hermione with a fierce look on her face. Harry looked back at the sky to see a few Death Eaters flying away. Dumbledore was getting closer to them and before he finally passed them, he stopped in front of them and turned his head a little. He shook his head and kept on walking while sending spells at the remaining Death Eaters. “I think we’d better go,” said Hermione. “Yea…good idea,” replied Harry and they headed back for the doors. “Do you think he saw us?” asked Hermione as they neared the staircase leading to the seventh floor corridor. “Yeah, he did. It’s the same look he gave Ron and me when we snuck out to see Hagrid in second year. Look, the staircase is normal again,” said Harry. They climbed the staircase and walked silently until they reached the Fat Lady’s portrait; then they pulled off the cloak and Harry shoved it back into his bag. “Flibbertigibbet,” said Harry to the Fat Lady. “And what were you two doing out when Professor McGonagall said to stay…” “Flibbertigibbet!” shouted Hermione. The Fat Lady gave her a piercing look and swung open; Harry had never seen the common room so packed. It seemed that almost every student was in the common room. Most of them trying to look out the window to see what was going on. “What happened?” asked Ginny walking over to them followed by Jeanette and Ron. “They told me what happened out in the staircase but what happened outside?” “Let’s go up in the boy’s dorm. Seamus, Dean, and Neville are over there by the window,” said Harry and they followed him up the stairs. *** “But Kingsley, Harry? I just don’t believe that he would ever turn his back on Dumbledore. He’s always been friendly,” said Hermione at breakfast the next day. “That is true, Harry,” said Ron. “But just think about it,” said Harry getting angry. “I have a dream and Voldemort says someone from the Order is betraying us and will be here on Halloween to try to take off some charms from the castle. Kingsley appears out of nowhere the same night and is hiding something on his left forearm and he looks at me with a gaze that I wouldn’t call friendly. Then yesterday evening, he doesn’t seem like himself and he keeps on running his hand over his left forearm and then at the attack, we see someone running out of sight and it wasn’t a Death Eater.” “Harry does have a point if you think about it,” said Jeanette picking at her food with her fork. “We all know that the Dark Mark is engraved on the left forearm of Voldemort’s Death Eaters.” “So now you don’t think it’s Snape anymore?” asked Ron. “That’s another possibility because we didn’t see him near the forest yesterday either,” said Harry. “By the way, Jeanette, that was a nice bit of magic last night.” “Thanks,” said Jeanette smiling. “It was cooler than nice,” said Ron and Jeanette blushed. “Mail’s here,” said Hermione as owls flew into the Great Hall. Hermione got her daily order of the Daily Prophet and Ron, a letter from Mrs. Weasley making sure that they were all ok. “Oh no!” squeaked Hermione. “What?” chanted Harry, Ron, and Jeanette. Hermione stared up at them and there were tears in her eyes. “What’s wrong, Hermione,” asked Harry and he took the paper from her and gasped. “I’m so sorry, Hermione. Well at least they weren’t there.” Hermione leaned on Harry’s shoulder and sobbed silently. Ron looked at Harry puzzled and he tossed it over to him. “Muggle house destroyed Halloween night,” whispered Ron. Under the headline was a picture of a nice house in flames and half the top missing. “I’m so sorry, Hermione,” said Jeanette. “Yeah, I’m sorry, too. But at least none of them were hurt. They are safe at Headquarters,” said Ron. Hermione wiped her eyes and smiled as best as she can. “Thanks. I understand but it just feel…” she started. “Yeah. We understand,” said Harry and he gave her a smile which made tears fall down her eyes even more. “Thanks guys,” said Hermione and she kissed Harry on the cheek and stood up. “I have to go to the bathroom. I’ll meet up with you later.” “I’ll come with you,” said Jeanette and she too gave Ron a kiss, making him turn red, and she left with Hermione. “What’s with you and Jeanette?” asked Harry smirking at Ron who shrugged. “I like her but I don’t have the guts to ask her out,” said Ron turning even redder. “Take her out after Quidditch practice one night and ask. I can tell you like her a lot,” said Harry. “Yeah, I’ll try. Wait, hark who’s talking. You and Hermione…” started Ron. “What else is in that paper?” asked Harry. Ron jokingly glared at him. “It just says about what happened last night and a few Death Eaters had been caught and sent to Azkaban,” said Ron glancing through the Daily Prophet. “Big deal. They’ll be out by tomorrow,” said Harry as the bell rang signaling the end of breakfast.
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on Aug 31, 2005 9:25:28 GMT -5
that was the end of chapter 10...yes i know, short and hardly any detail...i'm working on 11 now and hopefully it'll be longer
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Post by Jess on Aug 31, 2005 10:09:05 GMT -5
Wow, I think I missed a lot. I've been reading it on MNFF so I haven't been looking here. I'll go back and read everything on here, then...
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on Aug 31, 2005 10:31:02 GMT -5
i don't have this chapter up on MNFF yet it is still in the queue as usual
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on Aug 31, 2005 20:08:49 GMT -5
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Lyss118
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*~Not eVerYthiNg is aS it seEms~*
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Post by Lyss118 on Sept 11, 2005 17:06:23 GMT -5
I shall review! PRONTO! immeidielty! ... Wow, Harry actually didn't join it fighting?? Not even a few shots from under the cloak? aww, Where has his hero side gone? He did all that to get down there only to not fight? Well i guess his self-control is... controlled. And yet he fought with Malfoy before? perhaps he got it all out of his system then? i think.. that's the only thing that can explain it. yes yes.. also Harry used the phrase "deeply disturbed" thats kinda strange. Was Harry abducted and replaced?? i hope not! Harry! Come Back! We must get harry back from the aliens!! I have a bad feeling about Kingsley, yet they could be wrong? no? yes? ah well. But otherwise, It flowed wonderfully into each scene and everyone else seemed themselves.. especially Ron's stomach, lol. i suppose that shall never change...
ok. reviewed.
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on Sept 11, 2005 19:24:46 GMT -5
yayyyyyyyyy a reveiw...just ONE!!!! I'm not updating till i get more!
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Lyss118
Third Year
*~Not eVerYthiNg is aS it seEms~*
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Post by Lyss118 on Sept 14, 2005 18:41:53 GMT -5
Hey, didn't you guys hear him? (or at least read his last post?) He's not updatin till ppl review! C'mon guys don't ya wanna know what happens nxt? i do...
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on Sept 14, 2005 20:45:55 GMT -5
well i guess u will never find out...same goes for MNFF... i'll just write for myself
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Post by Spacey Caysie on Sept 15, 2005 1:18:54 GMT -5
I luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv it and I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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