You're Always At Your Best

[*~PoOkIe~*]

This is by me and Jeanette's best friend Mery.

Your Always At Your Best

Someone once told me to not wish for what you don't have
But to praise what you do have
Because what you don't have might be what others want and wish for.
That everyone has problems and that out there,
There is someone wishing to have a life like yours.
That tryign hard is better than thinking you can't and giving up,
Because when you try you are giving yourself something to be proud of.
That no one can judge you or criticize you
Because everyone is made up the same and appearances aren't all.
That you are always beautiful skin deep.
That you have everythign you'll eevr need when you are happy with whom you are.
That no one can tell you what to be
Because being yourself is better than pretending to be who you aren't.
That eevryone is beautiful and everyone can do and be what they want to be
If they just put their mind to it.
That if you really want something or someone to care for you, you'll get it.
That's how I got the person who said all of this
And I don't regret any hope or thought on it.

[Jess]

I think it was really good, it has the very meaning that I tell myself every day. If I start thinking, "Oh wow, I wish I could look like that," I tell myself, "But if I did, I wouldn't be me." I do think it could have been a little more on beat, as poetry usually has that even if it doesn't rhyme. But I'm being a little hypocritical here now, because mine has the same problem! And that is why I'm not a poet.

-Jess;D

[*~PoOkIe~*]

yeah i got that same message when i first read the poem itself

[*~PoOkIe~*]

Jess said:

I think it was really good, it has the very meaning that I tell myself every day. If I start thinking, "Oh wow, I wish I could look like that," I tell myself, "But if I did, I wouldn't be me." ....
-Jess;D

Two points to Slytherin