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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on May 22, 2005 16:42:01 GMT -5
Me and Jeanette and others went to this writers thingy and this is a very dumb poem i wrote there. It is stupid. Enjoy! I am a poet!
I see a bird flying into the bright summer sun.
I see children playing and having fun.
I see the rain washing down the newly painted house on a wet spring day.
I can hear it - splat splat - it's coming my way.
I hear the leaves fallign from the trees, their weightless structure gliding through the air.
I hear the wind blowing ouside in the storm,
And it makes me happy because I am inside watching it on this stormy morn.
I smell the roses, ah...what a smell.
Too bad the ladybugs scampered away, and oops, one just fell.
I taste the bright sun, nice and warm.
I feel an emotion, too hard to explain, it's not joy nor saddness, I guess you can say it's just plain.I told you.  |
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Jeanette
Second Year
You can't spell Hermione without Ron
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Post by Jeanette on May 22, 2005 19:57:08 GMT -5
Yeah! Ur right it is stupid. I mean who would write such stupid crap. It's a load of BS. I mean seriously KC were you sniffen crack ;D
Love your Boo,
Jeanette
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on May 22, 2005 20:02:06 GMT -5
JEANETTE... guys this is an example of what not to say about other people's writings. That is not constructive critism. Two points off Slytherin for your lack of respect Jeanette.  Love "Your Boo", KC |
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Post by Adam on May 27, 2005 10:57:13 GMT -5
JEANETTE... guys this is an example of what not to say about other people's writings. That is not constructive critism. Two points off Slytherin for your lack of respect Jeanette. Love "Your Boo", KC Whoa there. Hold your horses. I think she was kidding dude. Note the big smilie face at the end. Points added back to Slytherin until it's clarified. |
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on May 27, 2005 13:51:36 GMT -5
I did this like ages ago. Why add now...they are leading anyway and Jess did not have a problem with it. And she is the Headmaster. |
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Post by Adam on May 27, 2005 14:44:31 GMT -5
I did this like ages ago. Why add now...they are leading anyway and Jess did not have a problem with it. And she is the Headmaster. Whatever. If Jess is okay with it, that's cool. |
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Post by Jess on May 27, 2005 15:09:05 GMT -5
I would have taken points and pointed out that even if it's a joke, that kind of thing just doesn't work online. It starts fights instead of laughter.
By the way, what does "your boo" mean?
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on May 27, 2005 15:34:21 GMT -5
it's like saying, your love, or boyfriend or girlfriend.  |
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Jeanette
Second Year
You can't spell Hermione without Ron
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Post by Jeanette on Jun 5, 2005 18:59:46 GMT -5
See guys KC is just a loser and took away points Bcuz he was jealous that Slytherin was in the lead, and he knew that it was a joke Bcuz he saw it during school, and I told him it was. He still took off points. (I would have taken points and pointed out that even if it's a joke, that kind of thing just doesn't work online. It starts fights instead of laughter.) And I kind of disagree with you Jess on that one, bcuz of the fact that KC knows me well, and that the huge smiley face at the end shows that it's a joke. I told him that I liked it at school B4 he took off points. Plus it doesn't matter cuz we won anyway. GO SLYTHERIN! ;D (A smiley face indicates laughter, joking, playing, and/ or cheesing ;D)i just made this up |
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