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Post by Spacey Caysie on Aug 13, 2005 1:17:38 GMT -5
Goodbye I say to the world behind farewell at last, I am dead. Goodbye to you all who shed your blood your sacrifices staind me red. Farewell the pain of living, although I long for more to live. It was pleasure agony, fullfillment, hate. And I gave all I had to give.
The clock ticks fast. Time hasn't a heart. And Death waits anxiously for us for meet. As I am nothing more now then one more lost soul. It is life I cannot defeat. I beg of you only, only one last request as death seduces me painfully. Your life will move quickly. And as memory fades. Hold on tight to the memory of me.
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Post by punklil007 on Aug 13, 2005 8:08:56 GMT -5
wow...and people said my poetry was angsty. THIS IS AWESOME!!! I can never rhym poems without making them sing-songy and not deep or meaning ful but you did a really great job!!!
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Post by Jess on Aug 13, 2005 8:17:57 GMT -5
That was amazing. That's all I have to say.
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Post by punklil007 on Aug 13, 2005 9:35:10 GMT -5
That was amazing. That's all I have to say. It really was. You truly have a gift for rhyming. Jess: Check out "I'd like to teach my friends to sing." Not as good as this though.
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Post by Spacey Caysie on Aug 15, 2005 4:06:30 GMT -5
Thank you.. This was very hard to write..I wrote it after a dear friend of mine passed away...and I was suffering from depression at the time..
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