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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on May 22, 2005 16:37:02 GMT -5
This is by my brother. Enjoy!
The Real World
This world is full of hate Full of people who'd change your fate Your success they want to take Your every move they strike to break
But what can you do Friends or foes, who's who Like a determined boy learning to tie his shoe, Make a plan and follow through
But if you end up high and dry And you can't meet your expectation Shake it off, try not to cry The Lord will pave your destination.
©Copyright 2004 Emeka C. Nwajagu
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Jeanette
Second Year
You can't spell Hermione without Ron
Posts: 50
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Post by Jeanette on May 22, 2005 19:18:37 GMT -5
Ilike this one KC it's actually good
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on May 22, 2005 19:25:06 GMT -5
;D
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Post by Jess on May 23, 2005 9:50:37 GMT -5
You and your brother are both very talented with peotry, and especially with the message behind the peotry, conveying that in a way that won't make people feel you're trying to shove it on them (which of course you're not).
-Jess;D
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on May 23, 2005 13:49:19 GMT -5
thank you very much. i'll make sure to tell him that. ;D
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on May 23, 2005 14:00:48 GMT -5
You and your brother are both very talented with peotry, and especially with the message behind the peotry, conveying that in a way that won't make people feel you're trying to shove it on them (which of course you're not). -Jess;D two points to Slytherin
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