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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on May 22, 2005 16:39:03 GMT -5
This is by me and Jeanette's best friend Mery.
Your Always At Your Best
Someone once told me to not wish for what you don't have But to praise what you do have Because what you don't have might be what others want and wish for. That everyone has problems and that out there, There is someone wishing to have a life like yours. That tryign hard is better than thinking you can't and giving up, Because when you try you are giving yourself something to be proud of. That no one can judge you or criticize you Because everyone is made up the same and appearances aren't all. That you are always beautiful skin deep. That you have everythign you'll eevr need when you are happy with whom you are. That no one can tell you what to be Because being yourself is better than pretending to be who you aren't. That eevryone is beautiful and everyone can do and be what they want to be If they just put their mind to it. That if you really want something or someone to care for you, you'll get it. That's how I got the person who said all of this And I don't regret any hope or thought on it.
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Post by Jess on May 23, 2005 9:39:12 GMT -5
I think it was really good, it has the very meaning that I tell myself every day. If I start thinking, "Oh wow, I wish I could look like that," I tell myself, "But if I did, I wouldn't be me." I do think it could have been a little more on beat, as poetry usually has that even if it doesn't rhyme. But I'm being a little hypocritical here now, because mine has the same problem! And that is why I'm not a poet.
-Jess;D
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on May 23, 2005 13:54:25 GMT -5
yeah i got that same message when i first read the poem itself
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on May 23, 2005 14:03:08 GMT -5
I think it was really good, it has the very meaning that I tell myself every day. If I start thinking, "Oh wow, I wish I could look like that," I tell myself, "But if I did, I wouldn't be me." .... -Jess;D Two points to Slytherin
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