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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on May 22, 2005 16:49:36 GMT -5
This is the best poem I have written. Atleast in my opinion it is.
Make A Difference
We have to make a difference Because there is war in every place Why does everybody want vengeance, Why is there anger on everyone's face? Why don't we make it a mission, To be kind, not dumbfound And our world will strengthen And maybe by this, we'll be spellbound We should make this our destiny And maybe it'll come true If we dream about this and stop being angry, To warfare and sadness, we can say adieu So please let's stop the grievance, And lets make a difference. ©KC Nwajagu 2004
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Post by Jess on May 23, 2005 9:48:23 GMT -5
I agree, that's a very good poem. It's especially important with the war in Iraq going on. And I'm glad so many people are writing about it. The Black Eyed Peaz have made so many people actually think about it with their song "Where Is the Love?". And we need more of that. Oh and by the way... I liked the orange;)
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on May 23, 2005 13:50:35 GMT -5
lol thanks again. orange is my favorite color. i also am very very fond of that song by Black Eyed Peas!
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on May 23, 2005 14:06:14 GMT -5
I agree, that's a very good poem. It's especially important with the war in Iraq going on. And I'm glad so many people are writing about it. The Black Eyed Peaz have made so many people actually think about it with their song "Where Is the Love?". And we need more of that. Oh and by the way... I liked the orange;) Two points to Slytherin
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Post by punklil007 on Jun 12, 2005 12:27:04 GMT -5
great poem... not singsongy like most rhymings. Lil
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on Jun 12, 2005 13:55:04 GMT -5
thanx! ;D
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