Jeanette
Second Year
You can't spell Hermione without Ron
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Post by Jeanette on May 27, 2005 18:25:33 GMT -5
If Life Were A Game
If life were a game I wouldn't be able to die If life were a game I wouldn't have to cry If life were a game I would have no emotion If life were a game I couldn't enjoy the sound of the ocean
If life were a game I wouldn't feel pain If life were a game I wouldn't go insane
But life isn't a game, ther're so many boundaries of what we can and can't do We have to experience the pain, and ask," Are people thinking what I'm thinking too?"
Always feeling a push and a shove Feeling as if I will never find my true love
I wish that life was a game and I don't So many things that I can do, and most that I won't
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Post by Jess on May 27, 2005 18:46:49 GMT -5
Wow, that was... deep. You're right in every aspect of that poem. It really makes you think, you know? Would you really give up your thoughts and emotions and mortality for life to be a game? 5 stars.
-Jess;D
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Post by *~PoOkIe~* on May 27, 2005 18:52:06 GMT -5
Wow, that was... deep. You're right in every aspect of that poem. It really makes you think, you know? Would you really give up your thoughts and emotions and mortality for life to be a game? 5 stars. -Jess;D Very nice comment...2 points to Slytherin. I also agree Jeanette. It was really good and it makes you really thing. Good Job.
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