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Sept 5, 2005 15:43:53 GMT -5
Post by Jess on Sept 5, 2005 15:43:53 GMT -5
Wow, Lil, that was great. It kind of... tells my story... sort of...
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Lyss118
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Sept 11, 2005 16:15:06 GMT -5
Post by Lyss118 on Sept 11, 2005 16:15:06 GMT -5
i like it, very melancholy, i think.
lol, dont wish on helicopters.. i may have almost done that a couple times
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Sept 11, 2005 16:45:49 GMT -5
Post by punklil007 on Sept 11, 2005 16:45:49 GMT -5
yeah...thanx. Thanx for reading it 2. I know...alot of my poems...ok, most of them...almost all of them...are pretty upsetting. And sad...but that's how I write. You should see my emotional writing for schooL!!! It's pretty disturbing...I use really wierd metaphors and junk...metaphors...I mean wierd...werid...wierd???
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Sept 11, 2005 16:53:40 GMT -5
Post by Lyss118 on Sept 11, 2005 16:53:40 GMT -5
The PS made it lighter cos it made me laugh, so it was sad at first, but it doesnt leave you feeling like your missing something like a lot of sad poems do. But maybe thats just me. Well, i'm just trying to say the PS kept if from being too sad.
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Sept 13, 2005 14:37:12 GMT -5
Post by Spacey Caysie on Sept 13, 2005 14:37:12 GMT -5
I like it! I really like the "Don't wish on helicopters"
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Sept 14, 2005 7:56:22 GMT -5
Post by Jess on Sept 14, 2005 7:56:22 GMT -5
I like both. I can't tell you which I like better because I like both equally. Sorry my posts are so short. I'm sick, so I don't have much to say(except, like you found out last night, Lil, "EOMER!!! No, go away, Aragorn.").
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Sept 18, 2005 16:34:57 GMT -5
Post by Jess on Sept 18, 2005 16:34:57 GMT -5
I'm not stretching myself.
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