Kishi Tala

[teigra]

Full name: Kishi (kis-he) Sanura Tala
Birthdate: April 25
Age: 15
Nicknames: Kitten, Kitty, Night, Midnight, Wolf, Kay
Appearance: She is half native american half egyptian. 5'10", long legs, average weight, slightly curvy, thick jet black hair reaching waist, honey brown eyes, long fingers and nails, tattoo on her left shoulder blade of a buffalo skill with eagle feathers an ankh and cowee shells hanging from one of its horns by a beaded cord. Curling around the snout of the skull is an Egyptian asp rearing up to strike.
Wand: 12 in bloodwood, sphinx hair (if that's too out there I'll pick a different core lol)
Good traits: friendly...usually, loyal to her friends, stubborn/determined, smart, quiet, funny
Bad traits: hates being proved wrong, stubborn, extremely cold to those she dislikes, short temper, can be distant at times
Outer personality(how they appear to people): shy, quiet, nice once she gets to know someone
Inner personality(their true persona, can be the same): shy, has a bit of self doubt, doesn't truly trust people easily
Fears: heights, drowning, losing her family
Boggart: her parents dead
House: Slytherin
Patronus and can you perform one: wolf, no
Animagus form, if trained: tiger, yes

anything I need to change or add?

[Jess]

The wand core is definitely something you've got to change, but other than that she's a pretty solid character. Well done. The Animagus is what I have a problem with. She's 15 and she can make the transformation. The only people to manage that were the Marauders and they were brilliant. Maybe if she had some trouble doing it, keeping it stable or something, it would make her less perfect. I think you've got a good character though. Just those minor things and you'll be ready to go!

[teigra]

...I forgot a few things, not sure if they're important, but I'll include them now anyway. Oh does it matter if she's a character from the hp fanfic I'm writing?

Pets: Black cat named Isis, Red-tailed hawk named Paytah, King snake named Destiny and a half-wolf/half-husky named Balto

Favorite Subject: Potions and Care of Magical Creatures
Least Favorite Subject: Divination

Parents:
Father: Nantai Tala (Native American) - specialty: spirit healing, (in my story he's a new prof, here he can just work at the minstry, unless someone wants to play him). Was a Ravenclaw at Hogwarts.
Mother: Shani Tala (Egyptian) - specialty: Animal Magic (she can talk to and understand all animals, very rare, Kishi does NOT have this gift), runs an exotic animal care shop in Diagon Alley. Was a Hufflepuff at Hogwarts.

....took something out... didn't like it lol

[teigra]

Ok: wand core... um essence of dragon scale?

lol I wasn't sure about the transformation thing. Ok I'll make sure it's not stable, if she changes at all.

the stuff I added was just stuff I made up for my fic... any/all can be taken out or changed or whatever.

[Jess]

It's good! I don't care if she's a fanfic character, I do that sometimes too. Did she get her wand from Ollivander's or somewhere else? Because he only uses dragon heartstring, phoenix feather, and unicorn hair.

[teigra]

lol that's what I get for choosing a core from some website from yahoo lol dragon heartstring is good